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My only question is… autumn equinox is Sept. 21. So Sept. 23 is 2 days into fall, so why shouldn’t her hair be changing now?

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Sep 28Liked by Patricia J.L. πŸ‘»πŸ§ΆπŸ–ŠοΈ

Cleverly done! Good suspenseful take, and it's funny how she had more or less made peace with the seasonality of her hair haha! This was great!

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Oct 5Liked by Patricia J.L. πŸ‘»πŸ§ΆπŸ–ŠοΈ

This is a fun and inventive story. I enjoyed Change of the Seasons.

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Oct 11Liked by Patricia J.L. πŸ‘»πŸ§ΆπŸ–ŠοΈ

I really enjoyed this. So fun and unexpected, yet wonderful as I think of her in the context of all the leaves changing here now. The poll was closed but I would have picked "Goodbye." I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.

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