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My only question is… autumn equinox is Sept. 21. So Sept. 23 is 2 days into fall, so why shouldn’t her hair be changing now?

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The story takes place before September. My bad for not pointing that out. I often forget I write stories months or weeks before they get posted.

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She looks at her calendar and it says Sept. 23. Maybe a typo?

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Not to pick nits at a great fun story!

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I googled the day and Google told me Sept 23rd, but I didn't look at the year. I BLAME GOOGLE! LOL

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Sep 28, 2023Liked by Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️

Cleverly done! Good suspenseful take, and it's funny how she had more or less made peace with the seasonality of her hair haha! This was great!

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Oct 5, 2023Liked by Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️

This is a fun and inventive story. I enjoyed Change of the Seasons.

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I'm glad you did.

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Oct 11, 2023Liked by Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️

I really enjoyed this. So fun and unexpected, yet wonderful as I think of her in the context of all the leaves changing here now. The poll was closed but I would have picked "Goodbye." I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.

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The leaves are in full color mode where I'm at too. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

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