A Paranormal Fantasy Flash Fiction Story about a girl whose hair changes color with the seasons.
My only question is… autumn equinox is Sept. 21. So Sept. 23 is 2 days into fall, so why shouldn’t her hair be changing now?
The story takes place before September. My bad for not pointing that out. I often forget I write stories months or weeks before they get posted.
She looks at her calendar and it says Sept. 23. Maybe a typo?
Not to pick nits at a great fun story!
I googled the day and Google told me Sept 23rd, but I didn't look at the year. I BLAME GOOGLE! LOL
I googled it again and found this. https://www.usatoday.com/story/graphics/2023/09/19/first-day-of-fall-autumnal-equinox-visuals/70855021007/ So maybe Google didn't lie to me.
Cleverly done! Good suspenseful take, and it's funny how she had more or less made peace with the seasonality of her hair haha! This was great!
Thanks!
This is a fun and inventive story. I enjoyed Change of the Seasons.
I'm glad you did.
I really enjoyed this. So fun and unexpected, yet wonderful as I think of her in the context of all the leaves changing here now. The poll was closed but I would have picked "Goodbye." I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.
The leaves are in full color mode where I'm at too. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
My only question is… autumn equinox is Sept. 21. So Sept. 23 is 2 days into fall, so why shouldn’t her hair be changing now?
The story takes place before September. My bad for not pointing that out. I often forget I write stories months or weeks before they get posted.
She looks at her calendar and it says Sept. 23. Maybe a typo?
Not to pick nits at a great fun story!
I googled the day and Google told me Sept 23rd, but I didn't look at the year. I BLAME GOOGLE! LOL
I googled it again and found this. https://www.usatoday.com/story/graphics/2023/09/19/first-day-of-fall-autumnal-equinox-visuals/70855021007/ So maybe Google didn't lie to me.
Cleverly done! Good suspenseful take, and it's funny how she had more or less made peace with the seasonality of her hair haha! This was great!
Thanks!
This is a fun and inventive story. I enjoyed Change of the Seasons.
I'm glad you did.
I really enjoyed this. So fun and unexpected, yet wonderful as I think of her in the context of all the leaves changing here now. The poll was closed but I would have picked "Goodbye." I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.
The leaves are in full color mode where I'm at too. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.